According to Yong Cheng, Ms Pah, his general paper tutor, who has a passionate heart for teaching beneath her fiery personality, had aided him on his journey of discovery, of the english language.
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According to Yong Cheng, Ms Pah, his general paper tutor, who had a passionate heart for teaching beneath her fiery personality, aided him on his journey of discovery, of the English language.
I'd use "simple past" in this case. Do you know why?
Clear and concise. However, regarding language use:
ReplyDeleteAccording to Yong Cheng, Ms Pah, his general paper tutor, who had a passionate heart for teaching beneath her fiery personality, aided him on his journey of discovery, of the English language.
I'd use "simple past" in this case. Do you know why?
Not really.
ReplyDeleteI thought that perhaps I should have used who HAS a passionate heart for teaching, instead of had, since she still as that passion?